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Wednesday, June 27, 2007

Generalisation

This graph shows the percentage of money I spend on different items. I usually spend fifteen thousand per month, so I divided the money to five parts. The petrol costs about 40% of my money, because I have to drive a car to work then go to school, It constitutes the greatest of the total expenditure. I spend five thousand on food, it contain meal, beverage, fruit and snack, it accounts for 30%. It is followed by entertainment, with 10%, because I don't have much time to go to cinema or KTV, 10% for my insurance, remainder 10% for daily necessities. The graph shows how I spend my money per month.

1 Comments:

At 8:01 PM, Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said...

This graph shows the money how am I going to use.
-->the percentage of money I spend on different items.

I usually spend fifteen thousand per month, so I divided the money to five part.
-->five parts


The petrol about 40% of my money, because I have to drive car to work then go to school, it occupies most of my money.
-->Petrol costs about...
-->drive a car ...
-->It constitutes the greatest part of the total expenditure.


Five thousand for my food, it contain meal, beverage, fruit and snack, it occupies about 30%.
-->I spend five thousand on food.
--> It accounts for 30%...

可以用不同的動詞
accounts for
comprises
constitute



Entertainment occupies about 10%, because I don't have much time to go to cinema or KTV, 10% for my insurance, remainder 10% for daily necessities.
-->It is followed by entertainment, with 10%...



That total 100%, it show how am I spend my money per month.
-->The graph shows how I spend...

-->This can be moved to the top of the the paragraph.

 

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