The Children Watch Too Much TV
Nowadays the children watch too much TV, because thier parents are so busy and don't have time to look after them. Instead, TV is used as a babysitter to take care of childern, It is harmful to them. Because children are very naive and don't have enough experience to realize that TV shows present an unreal world, that commercials purpose mislead TV viewers in order to sell products that are sometimes bad or useless, childern usually believe and want to copy what they see. It is especially true when children watch cartoons, where violence is often used by the good guys to overcome the bad guys, and the action-packed programs will make young people less patient.
posted by timling @ 10:17 AM
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Nowadays the children watch too much TV, because of thier parent is so busy and don't have time to look after them.
-->TV becuase their parents are ...
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Instead, TV is used as a babysitter to take care of childern, but it will harmful to them.
-->it is harmful to..
-->good!
Because children are very naive and don't have enough experience to realize that TV shows present an unreal world, that commercials purpose mislead TV viewers in order to sell products that are sometimes bad or useless, childern usually believe and want to copy what they see.
-->good!
It is especially true when children watch cartoons, where violence is often used by the good guys to overcome the bad guys, and the action-packed programs will make young people less patient.
-->very good indeed!
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