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Wednesday, January 03, 2007

My Favourite Restaurant

Teppanyake in Gaoxing is a good restaurant because of it's location,view and hight quality food. It is located in the highest building in Gaoxing, you can see the splendor night scense of whole city and harbor. I personally have been there for few times, the first time I went there, I can't believe my eyes, It was set in 38 floor and one fourth of the wall is made up of glass, no matter where you sit, you can see the whole harbor and night scense. They not just have beautiful view, the food also of hight quility. A problem is price, but i think it is worth trying.
The restaurant is located in the hight building in Kaoxing It also a hotel. Even though you don't know difinite place, you also can easy to see the building. The restaurant offers a big parking space, so when I go there I've never had to looking for parking space, as I have in other reataurants. The service is fast and friendly, we just went there for few times, but the waiters and chef are treat you like your friend and know you are,what kind meal you like. When you have meal the waiters check in periodically throughout our meal to see if we need anything and to refill our drinks. If you visit there , you will understand what I say and be make a hassle-free dining experience.
Teppanyake not only is location. It also has great food , the menu offers a variety of dishes and combo to satisfied your family. There are steaks, prawn, lobster and oyster, for main course, them set puffee for side dishes, it incloud bread, cake, friut, soup and ice cream. You never worried about what children can eat, and they haven't heard complained for hungry. The another thing attract me is chef cooking in front of you and show how good they are. You also can see how fresh the see food, If you order a lobster or prawn, you can feel them still alive.
It was set on 38 floor and close to Gaoxing harbor, and one fourth of the wall is made up of glass,so no matter where you sit, in day time you can see the whole harbor and also can see the ship navigate from port to ocean, then afternoon you will see the sunset, at night you will see the building be lighted up, suddenly the whole city like have been embellished, it is so romantic if you go there with you girlfriend.
I am so lucky because that my Father invite me to that restaurant, otherwise I never know It. Even though It may cost an arm and a leg but I think it is worth trying, because for view, location and quality of food.

1 Comments:

At 7:42 AM, Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said...

Good!

The structure and organization of the whole essay is clear.
Avoid run-on sentences!



Gaoxing-->Which city is that?
Kaohsiung?

They not just have beautiful view, the food also of hight quility.
-->They don't just....the food is also...

The restaurant is located in the hight building in Kaoxing It also a hotel.
-->in one of the highest buildings in Kaohsiung. It is also a hotel.


Even though you don't know difinite place, you also can easy to see the building.
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-->address...can easily see the ....


but the waiters and chef are treat you like your friend and know you are
-->will treat..like a friend


Teppanyake not only is location.
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It also has great food , the menu offers a variety of dishes and combo to satisfied your family.
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You never worried about what children can eat, and they haven't heard complained for hungry.
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-->they ? Parents?
-->you haven't heard complaints...


The another thing attract me is chef cooking in front of you and show how good they are.
-->Another thing that attracts me is the chef is cooking...

You also can see how fresh the see food,
-->how fresh the sea food is.

If you order a lobster or prawn, you can feel them still alive.


It was set on 38 floor and close to Gaoxing harbor, and one fourth of the wall is made up of glass,so no matter where you sit, in day time you can see the whole harbor and also can see the ship navigate from port to ocean, then afternoon you will see the sunset, at night you will see the building be lighted up, suddenly the whole city like have been embellished, it is so romantic if you go there with you girlfriend.
-->Come one, I need a break. Use some period (.) at the appropriate places.
-->on the 38th floor



I am so lucky because that my Father invite me to that restaurant, otherwise I never know It. Even though It may cost an arm and a leg but I think it is worth trying, because for view, location and quality of food.


-->because my father inviated me there...
-->cost an arm and a leg? Intereting expression!

-->It think it is worth trying because of its...

 

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