Kenting is a great place to go for holiday, It is best to go with your friend or girlfriend also your family, because there have a lots of things to do and see. It is located in south of Taiwan and one of the most famous summer resorts.There is a coast and have many small beaches,so it is perfect for people who like water spoters,For example surfing and diving,It also can have BBQ and camping there, at night you can go to Kenting street to see the night market. There are a grat variety of traditional food and seefood you can choose from. If you go there with your children,you would like to visit an aquarium,It is abiggest aquarium in Taiwan, they might enjoy there for all day. These days Kenting is very popular for summer vocation and attract many foreign people from all the world.
posted by timling @ 1:31 AM
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Kendin-->the offical name is 'Kenting'
Kendin is a great place to go for holiday,It is best to go with your friend or girlfriend also your family,because there have a lots of things to do and see.
-->comma/period!
It is located in south of Taiwan and one of the most famous summer resort.
-->resorts (It's one of many others, so, you need to add an 's' to resort.)
There is a coast and have many small beaches,so it is perfect for people who like water spoters,For example surfing and diving,It also can have BBQ and camping there,At night you can go to Kendin street for night market,
-->to see the night market
-->use periods (.) at the end of each sentence instead of commas (,)
There have many traditional food and seefood you can choose.
-->There are a grat variety of ...you can choose from.
If you go there with your children,you would like to visit an aquarium,It is abiggest aquarium in Taiwan,They might enjoy there for all day.These days Kendin is very popular for summer vocation and attract many foreign people from all the world.
-->Good, the only problem is the use of punctuation marks (comma and period) and capital letters.
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