A friendly letter
Dear Ann
It is Thursday night , I am sitting in classroom attending the writting course . Now i study in collage of English department , I just sitting infromt of computer to writ a letter for you .
We didn't see each other for a long time and keep touch , I have no idear what you do in Korea.
Tonight,the city will crowded with people . Many of them are going to the trian station and bus station to buy a ticket for next day , Because we got five days vacation , Fortunately, I don't need to join it because my house is close school , I will go to the night market with my classmates after school . They are also good friend although we just know each other a few weeks ago,I like our friend from Sydney .
I am fine , but I miss you and my other friends . I enjoy my classes and I am learning a lot . Most of my classments are nice . Do you have new boyfriend now , After coming back to Taiwan I still haven't find a new girlfriend . Now I working in my father's factory in daytime and go to school at night .
How are you ? I hope you are well and happy . How is Korea ? Vincent and I hope to visit you soon . When will you come to TAIWAN for a visit ? Vincent says to tell you ''Hello .'' Please write soon . Try writing in English .
posted by timling @ 6:10 AM
1 Comments:
Hello
Don't forget to capitalise the first letter in the first word of a sentence.
Try not to write very long sentences. Use the period (.) and comma (,) properly.
for writting course
-->attending the writing course
I just sitting infromt of computer to writting a letter for you
-->to write a letter...
for long time
-->for a long time
so i have know idear what you do in Korea
-->I have no idea ...
Tonight in the city will crowded with people .
-->Tonight, the city will be crowded with people
Many of them going to trian and bus station to buy a ticket for nextday , Because we got five days vacation , Fortunate i don't need to join it my house is close school , I will going to nightmarket with my classmates after school .
-->Many of them are going to the train station and bus station...for the next day because...
Fortunately, I don't ...because my house.... I will go to the night market.
they are also good friend although we just know each other few weeks , but I prefer our friend from different country in SYDNEY .
-->They...good friends ..a few weeks ago. I like our friend from Sydney.
after came back TAIWAN I still haven't find a new girlfriend . Now I working in my father's factory in daytime and go to school at night .
-->After coming back to Taiwan, I still haven't found...
for visit -->for a viist
they are also good friend although we just know each other few weeks , but I prefer our friend from different country in SYDNEY .
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